The blog Christian Nature Poetry has posted the sonnet "The Lantern Out of Doors" by Gerald Manley Hopkins. It includes the phrase, "Christ minds", which bears a lot of thinking about. So a few thoughts follow. For stanza three I have used Scots, firstly because "minds" is "remembers" in Scots, but then since a few double meanings are possible. So I have put an English version below. For stanza one "hind" can mean both a female deer and a peasant.
Christ minds.
He seeks and finds, us, His wandering
Hinds; heals our diseases, our blindness,
Holds our hearts and binds their breaks.
Yet Christ minds
Our wandering; grieves at unaligned
Living; see our confined and unconfined
Wilderness paths: all kinds of revolt.
But, aye, Christ minds
Whit He his dien fer tyned
Craturs; whit He his tholed that
They mith be kynd.
But, [yes or always], Christ remembers
What He has done for [lost or antlered]
Creatures; what He has endured that
They might be [kindred or caring].
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