Tuesday 19 March 2019

GRACE

Here His grace
Is complete:
On my face
At His feet.

17/03/2019

I doubt if I'll manage to get shorter than that!

3 comments:

  1. I don't write poetry of any kind but I got this one. If you make it too short, you might lose some interruptions.
    Love the last two lines but without the first two lines ones would wonder why the two are needed. His grace is the only thing I would fall on my face for.

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  2. Sometimes the shortest verse makes the greatest impact. I like this one, because it's a straight forward act of submission to the God of the universe, acknowledging our response to the source of our Grace. Thanks.

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